Fuck you, love me

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I used to think that our brains had touched 

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during an acid trip one muggy dawn in early June 

as the sun peeked out from behind the pines

in the forest out back

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you grabbed my hand and our bodies tumbled backwards 

to be caressed by the earth 

fingers intertwined, laughing 

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and we laughed as we walked in through the dawn

to the only place open 

where the waitress knew my order

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you slipped an AA card into my purse while I wasn't looking

like it was a joke

and you led me back home

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and you plucked the marlboro from my mouth as we fell to the bed

you took a drag

and ripped the clothes from my body 

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you held me as the sun turned muggy into sweltering 

you told me you loved me

and you left me for good this time. 

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Posted Mar 26, 2020, 1:12 AM UTC

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