Critique my spanish please! Be honest! What words made it obvious that I’m not a native?

Pretty good dude. Careful not to turn “e” into a diphthong, as you kind of did with the word “entonces” in this recording. Most likely an oversight, though. Your intonation is good for the Caribbean/South American dialects you are emulating/channeling.

¡Muy bien! te noté un poco incomodo al momento de pronunciar las "r", pero de resto no se nota mucho que no eres nativo.

Your voice reminds me of a robot here. Very. Direct. And. Straightforward. BUT very understandable tho!

Hi, I'm a native. I found your pronounciation excellent (at least I don't recall any mistakes), but I did notice that your intonation is not that good. I'd recommend you try to enhance it because that will be key when it comes to sounding like a native. Good luck!