Thank you for the lovely Comment. I’m glade you enjoyed it!

Wow I don't think I read this so much as downloaded it impatiently into my head. "Sparks unable to save the flame" deserves a pat on the back. Good-bye felt like a fourth wall break and I think it was expertly employed. Nice one OP. Thanks for sharing it

I    think there’s brilliance in this piece being a poetry. I think it’s    genius to force the listener to look up some words, thus forcing the    reader to read it several times; you couldn’t do that with a long piece.    Lastly, you end with humility, which is another only-way to pull this    off.

It’s short, it’s high-brow without being high-brow, and it’s fun in its poetry goodness. It’s brilliant.

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