I really think your OC is amazing

I think there’s brilliance in this piece being a poetry. I think it’s genius to force the listener to look up some words, thus forcing the reader to read it several times; you couldn’t do that with a long piece. Lastly, you end with humility, which is another only-way to pull this off.

It’s short, it’s high-brow without being high-brow, and it’s fun in its poetry goodness. It’s brilliant.

I think thewe’s bwiwwiance in this piece being a poetwy. I think it’s genius to fowce the wistenew to wook up some wowds, thus fowcing the weadew to wead it sevewaw times; you couwdn’t do that with a wong piece. Wastwy, you end with humiwity, which is anothew onwy-way to puww this off.

It’s showt, it’s high-bwow without being high-bwow, and it’s fun in its poetwy goodness. It’s bwiwwiant.

nice.