Your Poems are amazing

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Posted Aug 30, 2020, 9:50 AM UTC

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Nice_OCpostOP•

I think there’s brilliance in this piece being a poem .I think it’s genius to force the listener to look up some words, thus forcing the reader to read it several times; you couldn’t do that with a long piece. Lastly, you end with humility, which is another only-way to pull this off.

It’s short, it’s high-brow without being high-brow, and it’s fun in its poem goodness. It’s brilliant.

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Nice_OCpostOP•

I think there’s brilliance in this piece being a comment .I think it’s genius to force the listener to look up some words, thus forcing the reader to read it several times; you couldn’t do that with a long piece. Lastly, you end with humility, which is another only-way to pull this off.

It’s short, it’s high-brow without being high-brow, and it’s fun in its comment goodness. It’s brilliant.

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