ghetto supastar
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Posted Sep 12, 2020, 12:32 PM UTC
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Im real curious why you think you'd get sued? Poem was top notch btw.
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it's inspired by a song i like (with the same name). and thanks!
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im only in two minds about the "supastar". on one hand i love the vibe it gives off but on the other it makes it kind of awkward and uncomfortable for me. other than that everything feels great and i love the poem!!
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I don't have a lot of advice kind of feedback, just wanted to say I really liked this. It is a cool poem and sounds to me like there is a lot of story behind it. Good work, I hope somebody else has better advice to make it feel more complete.
thanks for the encouragement!
i wish random people wouldn't downvote every poem i post here. i find myself unwilling/unable to do anything about it because i'm not an impressionist. so i'm left simply vaguely disturbed.
Quite welcome!
And I feel you. Don't take it too hard though, we are all here because we want to share our art. Not all people will appreciate it, but if it is close to your heart, than it is worth sharing.