Loved that last line, just a right ending for this seemingly chaotic experience for that someone. This is like a release of emotions after a rough experience or memory and it really shows. For criticisms, I don't really have anything as the words you chose made it honest and feel close to home, the structure works and it had a nice ending.
Loved that last line, just a right ending for this seemingly chaotic experience for that someone. This is like a release of emotions after a rough experience or memory and it really shows. For criticisms, I don't really have anything as the words you chose made it honest and feel close to home, the structure works and it had a nice ending.