[2192] Kingdoms

EDIT: it’s 2292, not 2192.

Hi, guys! These are three snippets taken from the beginning of my story: two POV chapters, one prologue. It’s set in a continent of fantasy kingdoms.

In the prologue, three people flee a group of soldiers. In the first POV, a dude is going through the forest. In the second POV, a vengeful girl is about to graduate from military academy.

I’m looking for anything, really, that would help improve the flow, content, and structure of this story. Do tear it apart! But I have a few main questions:

1. Worldbuilding. What do you know of the world so far?
2. Characterization. What are your first impressions of the characters? Is my characterization inconsistent?
3. Prologue. Is it compelling? Do I need to give the characters more reason to run away, or maybe hint at some horrible things? How might I stir up the reader’s curiosity, besides giving them an influx of emotions?

Thanks!

Link to my story

Link to critique [3216] Orphan Andy

ps. I had no idea what to title my story, hence the spectacular name