[376] Tough Conversations

Hi there,

I am working on short stories to improve my ability to be concise, hence why this piece is so short. The goal of this piece is to relate a specific message about tough conversations when leading teenagers (as a 22 year old).

Areas of help I am looking for

• Seem realistic for a 22 year old
• Likable protagonist
• Captivating/”want to keep reading” factor
• The ending feels really weak. What do you think and is it realistic?

Story: Critique: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/kib27g/578_ry%C5%AB%C5%8D/ggpzscm/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=iossmf&context=3