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JRStod

The Stranger

Something’s in the way

But nothing’s out of sight

Im feeling myself tonight

But not the way you might

I gouged out my eyes

And put them on the desk

Its hard to say the rest   Because then I saw the real me

He was ugly

But he was me

His hair was red and his eyes were green

His body was lean 

He was me

He spoke eloquently

Smirking to show his sharp teeth beneath

And he was me

He knew all about me

But was a stranger all the same

I wish I could have heard him continue

But he had to abstain

For the truth is real and wicked

And must be kept under lock and chain

He then had to go

As quick as he came

And walked over to my eyes 

To put them back in their frames

Nothing is out of sight

Im feeling myself tonight

But not the way you might.

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Posted Jan 19, 2021, 4:06 AM UTC

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sweetpea0301•

Loved the imagery, and the way you described your inner Demons come out. I can just imagine being in a group thinking, how many people here have occurrences like that without anyone knowing? Great poem !

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JRStodOP•

Thanks I appreciate it! Although I dont think of it as demons... more so as the real you! Truth may be ugly but it is not a lie ;)

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ItsJustBeLikeThat•

Nothing is out of sight

Im feeling myself tonight

But not the way you might.

I cant help but love these lines, it displays a lot of confidence from the narrator and such independence from they way others might see you. Beautiful!

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JRStodOP•

Thanks alot! I have been sporadically writing poetry and I also love these lines. Its really cool when something comes to you and the rest writes itself - a rare occurence

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