[480] Eyes of a Blind Dog

This is a flash piece and I'm wondering if you think it's currently strong enough to stand on its own or if you think it could use some fleshing out. I'd also be quite interested to know your interpretation. Thanks.

I'm using some extra words I've got banked if that's okay. My last post was 3077 words and my critiques totaled around 4500 words. I'll use the rest of this critique.

Story.