[M4F] [Script offer] The Dreadful Clock [horror] [adults] [demon] [succubus] [oral] [period sex] [vaginal sex] [body snatcher] [sacrilege] [don’t open the book!]
Summary: A loving husband slowly realizes something about his wife has changed. A demon has taken over her body. But why? And what happened to her soul?
- Inclusivity note: no physical descriptors were used
- Trigger warning: contains reference to animal death
- Although sound FX are optional, improv is optional, and both are welcome; I crafted this story around sound repetition. To build the horror atmosphere, key sounds are repeated every scene, to increase the feeling something weird is happening.
- URL: direct link to script on Google Docs
- Word count: 1,886 (62% plot, 38% porn)
Narrative tone:
- He's a nice guy! He loves his wife and cat very much, can’t imagine life without them.
- The sex scenes are meant to be unnerving, more than erotic. While I encourage you to improv any moaning or dialogue you wish, if at any point you’re uncertain what tone to use, my goal was to make the listener feel uncomfortable. The sex is strange, and at times painful for him. He just...can’t stop, and he doesn’t understand why.
- Occasionally the narrator repeats himself: he keeps noticing a bad smell. He’s smelling brimstone, which smells like rotten eggs, or sulphur. He keeps noticing that it’s cold, and asking if his wife put the fireplace on, he smells something burning.
- The narrator hums to himself a few times, and it’s always the same tune. I suggest Don't Fear The Reaper, but it’s your choice.
- This story contains five lines of Latin. If you don’t speak Latin, that’s ok! Neither do most listeners, so they won’t know if you say it incorrectly. I included an audio file of me pronouncing the lines for you, and a written pronunciation guide. You got this!
Fills:
Thank you to TheSinisterRat for making time to talk this one out with me.
Constructive criticism is welcome via comments, DM, or anonymously.
The master list of my scripts is pinned to my Reddit profile.
If you do a fill, please tag me. Thanks for reading!
Christina 💙
PS: 🚻 For gender-flips, please DM me first.
DISCLAIMER: This is a fictional story about fictional characters, written by an adult, for adults. All characters depicted within are age 18+.
Posted Jan 29, 2021, 10:09 AM UTC · edited
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