BEHIND THE SCENES of an April Script™ - Christina - Daddy's Little Cumslut

Hi everyone! I'm going to talk about a script I wrote called "Christina - Daddy's Little Cumslut". It was part of the massively successful "Father Daughter Society" collab that we posted a while back. Six script writers and six voice actors came together to create some truly messed up incestuous craziness, and I'm telling you: Every one of the participants knocked their various contributions out of the park. Every script was great. Every performance was spot on. It was conceived and organized by my friend u/LateStageInfernalism, and was run with adeptness and care throughout. I can't say enough about my fellow collaborators.

Last time I did this, I did it for my script Catholic Kink, which is one that obviously has some multi-layered aspects to it. This time I'm doing one that may seem to be the opposite. It might SEEM to have less to do with nuanced reality and more to do with pure perversion, but I disagree. I hope you'll bear with me, because a LOT of thought went into this script.

Despite how easy it might be to dismiss a script like this as just throw away porn, it was EXTREMELY challenging to get right. And I was DETERMINED to get it right. Here's what happened.

This was my first true incest script. I flirt with incest all the time, mostly doing step-cest, but I had never really gone all the way. The reason for that speaks to why this script is the way it is. I find that consensual incest isn't for me. It's hard for me to explain why, but I guess I don't really need to. It boils down to the fact that if I'm going to do incest it needs to be decidedly NON-consensual, with an extreme dose of power-imbalance. I told LateStageInfernalism (LSI) this going in and he was all on board. I also told him I wanted to do a cum-training script. Again, for reasons that I suppose I could go on and on about, I'm WAAAAY into cum-play--especially cum-play as humiliation. It's a huge thing for me, and if I'm honest, I have to actively stop myself from throwing it into almost every script I write. :) I really wanted to go full-on "id" with this one though, and thankfully, once again, LSI was onboard.

So, I was off, merrily writing a script where this poor girl named Christina was being forced to become a cum-slut by her brothers and her dad, even though it's the last thing she wanted to be. I had an idea that daddy would be taking her somewhere in the car, and he surprises her by taking her to a Duran Duran concert (the script was set in the eighties). Only when they arrive, it turns out Christina isn't there to see Duran Duran, she's there to be a plaything for Duran Duran's roadies. I wrote it; it was pretty good. I had a plan, and it was going well. Once I got to the "gangbang" part, though, is when I found trouble.

It turns out (and I actually knew about this pitfall before I even started writing this script) writing cum-play / gangbang scripts is exceedingly hard... and extremely unsatisfying. While it's POSSIBLE, it's a LOT of work to do it in an interesting and sexy way. I was writing a gangbang in real time, and I was doing my best. It was good... but it wasn't great. Not only was my heart not in it, cuz I had to worry about all these guys, when all I was REALLY there for was the cum, but also, the sexiness of a gangbang kind of goes away when you have to concentrate so hard on the mechanics and logistics of the action. At some point, I realized: This just isn't an April Script™ anymore. It's good... it's fine, but it's not ME.

I bugged LSI constantly about my trials and tribulations, and he was a patient and supportive listener. He later joked that I had probably written three really good scripts that no one would ever see because I kept deleting them and starting over. He was probably right, but those three first attempts weren't April Scripts™, and I really wanted it to take my breath away when I heard it performed, so I kept slogging away at it.

The real-time gangbang was cut. I had an idea that Christina was going to be literally covered in cum, sliding around the vinyl backseat of daddy's car on the way home. That idea was cut too. I had her brothers joining in on the action later. That was cut. ALL of that was cut.

Instead, I did what I KNEW I should have done from the beginning when it comes to cum-centric scripts like this: I turned it into a sneaky narrative. Instead of a real time gang-bang, Christina TALKS about those gangbangs--and lends her perspective about them after the fact. Instead of crazy action with lots of cum, there is a single blowjob with a little cum... but you know what? A little bit goes a LONG way when you've got the mood and the story right.

I may be wrong, but in the end, I feel like I absolutely delivered the April Script™ I was hoping to create. It's an intimate encounter between two people, but it encompasses such a depth of control, power imbalance, deep humiliation and beautiful cycles of her resistance followed by resignation and back again, I don't think it would have been possible to feel all the feelings this script has to offer if I'd done it another way. In the end, THIS script is what incest is really about for me. It's the ultimate betrayal. The ultimate control. It's exploring the depths of humiliation that only incest can provide, and yet allows me to explore a character who is trying her very best to resist--without any hope that she will win.

When all was said and done, my friend u/PrettyPlzKillMeNow performed my script. The resulting audio stands as one of my favorite audios on GWA. Pretty is heartbreaking as Christina, and Christina is at once beautiful, vulnerable, sweet, naive, brave, corrupted and broken--all those traits and feelings at once is what makes her SO incredible sexy to me.

To many this might be just another incest story--another tale of perverted smut that doesn't mean anything. To me, it's a story of both bravery and surrender, of despair and hope. Through kink and perversion, it explores a little bit of what it is to be human. Christina is a BEAUTIFUL character to me in so many ways. And as an added bonus, both her quiet suffering AND her desperate defiance makes me cum. It’s the very essence of what I seem to be all about.

I'm very very proud of her--and the story I created in which she plays a leading part.

Thank you for listening. :) You can check out Pretty's AMAZING performance, as well as all the other scripts and performances of this remarkable collab here.