[790] Jeevani

The opening of a novella of sorts.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1O657fIH9Yc4ADNlWsG9TFsaYI3FEkQG8vXFLbqThmt8/edit?usp=sharing

Things I'd like to know:

1. Is it a bit confusing what is happening?
2. General thoughts on style, character etc. (although I realise it's too short)

Any other comments would be appreciated!

Critique: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/l98w7f/855_the_man_who_sang/glhg342/?utm_source=reddit&utm_medium=web2x&context=3