Aw. Short and sweet. I did not know that Americans pronounced it "vace" and not "vaze". Something about the even meter and choice of wording make it feel Victorian to me. It's a very nice image, the subject of the poem transforming your surroundings. Very nice. Thanks for sharing.

Wow. This is a beautifully short poem. It explains perfectly the way that this speaker feels. It portrays unconditional love, and does it well. I loved the consonance; I'm a sucker for a good rhythmic poem. Keep writing, my friend. I enjoy your work.

The Ornament of my Heart