Stumbling
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Posted Feb 24, 2021, 7:45 AM UTC
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Posted Feb 24, 2021, 7:45 AM UTC
Very nice, I like the uncertainty this gives me as the speaker stumbles around which I assume is a symbolic representation for how all of us tend to stumble through life. Great effort overall!
Kinda like stumbling around which answer is right.. Thank you glad you enjoyed!
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This is really good, it almost kind of sounds like a nursery rhyme to me because of the flow and some rhyming in it. I also love how the length of the poem gradually gets bigger and bigger towards the end, kind of like a scale indicating just how indecisive the person is becoming.
Thank you the scaling was almost subconscious but your absolutely right..