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I really love this poem, its one that made me say “damn i wish i wouldve written that”...you perfectly encapsulated feeling lost and trying to hold on to something that youre struggling to remember or are scared is slipping away. trying to hold on to the good youd had. i also really love the line pattern and structure of this poem. short, sharp, but still flowing and gentle. it reads almost breathless which i think helps propel the emotion of feeling lost and trying to remember something to cling to. good job and thank you for sharing!!

This is beautiful.

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