My first video uploaded last month. I do 3D printing projects! Do give feedback

Firstly, I'd like to say your background music and thumbnail are very well done, making the beginning quite enjoyable overall. Secondly, and this is only my only critique for you, the audio at times was difficult to hear as the music was relatively loud and you were speaking quite quickly, especially durning the intro. Other than that the production value of this video is quite high and the topic is quite interesting.

Thanks,

Cool video I found it a little difficult to hear or understand and parts as the audio seems to get quiet randomly. If you were going to do voice overs I would recommend a quality Mic. Other than that the 3-D printing is interesting and cool see see the process.Keep up the great work

I've noticed others saying this but I also agree at times it's a bit hard to understand what you're saying. i would recommend improving your audio quality or maybe adding subtitles even if the audio quality is hard to tell what you're saying, people can still see the subtitles and be able to understand what's going on. Hope this helps. You did a great job with the background music and overall editing of the video!

as a 3d artist- dis kinda' content is somethin' I would just watch on a casual basis. Cool design, cool bit of problem solving, and I like how you explain da' whole process as you are doin' it, and how you go inta' WHY you are doing it to.
Dat all said- I do think you could do with a quality upgrade on your video and audio. A lot of noise in da' BG- I would consida' using a noise gate to lower down some of dat white noise
Da video at points is a bit grainy. not sure if dis is a focus issue or a senor quality issue- but check your ISO and make sure it isn't too high- possibly add more light to our scene and lower da ISO down. you may also want ta look inta LUTs and color correction- you might be able ta add some more' sat and contrast, and make da video pop a bit more.
Good stuff though. I could fo' sure see you buildin' a followin' wit dis kinda content.

Hello! This was a cool idea for a video first off. There were times that it was hard to understand you so definitely subtitles would be helpful. You could even play around with adding sound effects to each piece to make it feel more “Jedi-ee” if that makes sense.

Hi there! I really enjoyed this video. I think as far as the thumbnail goes though I'd love to see a picture of Cal Kestis in the background just to tie everything together. I'd like to hear a bit more about why you wanted to make this, what the character and lightsaber mean to you etc. too. Hope this helps!

Hey mate, really cool video ideea. Thumbnail looks pretty cool, I like your edit as well.Everything looks very proffesional. Only thing I could add might be the mic quality but I guess you'll change it if everything goes good:) Wish you luck with your YT channel bro

Love the video. PRETTY COOL! Nice Work :)

Nice saber!! The editing was a bit slow, but that tends to just be how modeling videos go. The thumbnail could have used a bit more, maybe if you had cut out the lightsaber and stand and used an outline on it, it might make it pop a bit. If you had some color on the back wall it might add more depth to the thumbnail, making the saber stick out a bit more. This could be done with some colored lights, then editing the background to be blurred, or maybe if you have some shelves with other items such as models, using that as a background a blurring it could help. Hope this helps!

PS: I really want that lightsabor lol

overall video quality is good.

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the music is way too loud

your voice is way too quiet.

#1 that’s pretty cool #2 I didn’t know who Cal Kestis was as I didn’t play the game. But once I watched the video and you showed the box art of the game I immediately recognized who it was. I’d suggest getting the picture of him from the box art, cut out the background to where it’s just him and putting that in the thumbnail. One of the hardest skills to master is seeing a video from the audiences perspective. This is one of those things that is hard to see as a creator but is crucial to getting new people to watch your videos. Also even tho I didn’t play the game, that guy is super recognizable to me, so capitalize on that(:

Its a good video. nice quality, closeups are good etc. however, the length. yes you have a lot of content! Thats good, but some shots could be left out (like showing the markers for an extended length), or when you show multiple parts that don't really have a description, you could just use 1 overview shot (like at 5.41) and describe the ones that you have something to say about. Also the music at 5.53 jumps to really loud all of a sudden, kinda took my ears by surprise.

Keep it up though, project looks fun!

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