(Spoilers) I can’t get no…
..satisfying conclusion to Penny’s character.
First a disclaimer; this isn’t a Jaune hate post or anything of the sort. I’m seeing debate on this devolving into accusations, so I want to cut that off now. This is my opinion/critique on Penny’s demise which includes Jaune’s part in it.
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Penny had a fantastic arc this volume. She went from a character I was largely indifferent about, to someone that I felt very endeared to. The last volume told us Penny had a soul, this volume we got to explore it. Seeing Penny’s humanity made Ruby’s reinforcement meaningful, rather than empty rhetoric. Penny had heart. Ironically, her end is soulless to me.
Jaune being tapped to take the plunge is where it all falls short. Mostly because it doesn’t feel earned. He lacks a relationship with Penny, a rapport. He also lacks an arc this volume that would crossover in a satisfying manner. It feels clinical. And I can’t get behind his grief, I feel so indifferent about it. The human connection is missing.
That’s what is unsatisfying. Penny dying is heartbreaking, but Jaune doesn’t add much to that. I feel like there was a missed opportunity in really driving her sacrifice home. That is, using Ruby instead.
The one person that’s been unwavering in her belief in Penny’s soul was Ruby. It’s built into their dynamic, it makes their relationship intimate and meaningful. Ruby’s firm insistence mattered. And honestly, it feels like their arc this volume was working towards this moment, even foreshadowed. If we substitute Ruby for Jaune, then all the emotional build-up becomes a climax.
Ruby would be in a difficult position of choosing to accept Penny’s sacrifice or reject it. But what’s more human than putting your life before others like Penny is doing? Effectively, this is Ruby’s final reinforcement of Penny’s soul. Her insistence on Penny’s humanity would be put to the test. That isn’t just heartbreaking, it’s a devastating conclusion to their arc. That’s what I wanted; a heartfelt, intimate moment that had real impact behind the blow. Something that would stick with me, because I’m already feeling what happened slipping away.
Now, I’m pretty there’s going to be objections to Ruby being the one there for Penny. To address a few:
- It had to be Jaune because he’s a guy: This falls short because the whole point was to choose a successor. Penny could’ve handed her powers to Weiss, but then it’s the same situation. The difference is the target. Same with Ruby. Penny has the agency to pick who she thinks is the best choice in the current situation.
- Something, something Jaune focus: I don’t object to Jaune getting focus. If anything, he needed more and is missing a clear, concise arc this volume. If he did have one that crossed over into Penny’s, then it could’ve been very satisfying. But there is no effort put into the build-up to this moment. That’s what I take issue with, it’s not Jaune as a character in general.
- Ruby wouldn’t do it: The simple counter is yes, she could. There is a lot of underestimating of her character, and I don’t blame people for that. Ruby is underutilized in her own story. She often doesn’t get a climax to her arcs in a volume. This makes her feel distant from events due to a lack of agency. She needed a moment to firmly attached her to the finale, rather than dropping her into the void not even halfway into it.
Overall, it does feel like the writers backed out of a more meaningful conclusion at the last moment. And yes, I understand that they have plans for the future, and this may make more sense next volume. But I’m tired of this “time will tell” style of writing. Time does tell, and it’s been telling me over and over again that RWBY doesn’t deliver. It’s always in the future. I want a solid character arc with a satisfying conclusion in a single volume.
I shouldn’t need to wait until the last moment of the series to get satisfaction.
Anywho, that’s my thoughts. Feel free to add yours, I would love to hear some different views!
Posted Mar 28, 2021, 10:57 PM UTC
It could never be Ruby for one simple reason: Penny would've passed the power onto her.
She promised to do so a few episodes ago. What better choice than her best friend and the greatest person she's ever known? By throwing Ruby into the void, Penny assumed that she was dead and had to send the powers to Winter. It's the best narrative choice since the opposite is giving Ruby ultimate power that can easily break the story. Silver eyes + Maiden Powers = Broken Shonen Protagonist
Okay... why not Winter, then? She was going there anyway. They got Ironwood out just to prevent Winter from going into the Vault. Instead of asking Jaune for him to kill her, she just runs straight into Winter's sword after Winter refuses to accept the power.
Because why Winter when you have Ruby? She will always be Penny's number one.
I understand why it can't be Ruby, I can see why she was taken out early. Which is why I said that it could've been Winter instead. Winter had development and character interactions with Penny, and had a story to tell about sacrificing others vs sacrificing oneself this very volume. Her breaking away from Ironwood could've been used to finish off this story, with her refusing to accept Penny's death and thus forcing Penny to do it like a Nagato and Yahiko moment. So Winter only gets the power when she doesn't want to (add in a "Weiss is in danger, I need to help her" and a "I got the powers, even though I didn't want them anymore, and I still couldn't save Weiss" to the mix), and it was Penny's choice to give it to her.
Mind you, I'm only talking about this being a possibility. It could have been Winter. I have no idea what CRWBY intends to do here.
Like I mentioned, it's not much of hurdle writing wise.
Ok, then, explain how. Because you didn't mention this topic.
Oh, sod - sorry I got comments mixed up. My bad.
So yeah, writing wise it isn't much of hurdle. Penny and Ruby could easily reason that Winter would be the best option in the moment. Giving them to Ruby doesn't help, since she's already a target and there's no guarantee she could escape from her current situation, even with the power boost. It can be framed with Ruby being out aura and weaponless, Neo pressing her, and Cinder coming for them as well. Misdirection could be employed as well; Cinder and the audience are made to believe Ruby got the power.
No biggies.
That frame is unlikely to happen since they would need to have a moment to themselves which is impossible with Neo pressing Ruby all the time and even more so if you throw Cinder into the mix. Not to mention, precisely because Ruby is weaponless, the power would allow her to create a replacement for Crescent Rose. More so, Ruby's SE makes her a danger to Cinder hence why Neo was the only one fighting her. If Ruby gets the power then Cinder cannot get them without facing a huge risk of instant kill. And with the powers, she can easily take down Neo. Ruby would defeat both of them if she was a maiden. I don't see how Penny would think Winter is a better option.
They could have had ruby transfer the powers to someone else in some volume or something
That can only be done with Atlas' technology (which is now under the sea) or by killing her so it's obviously not gonna happen.