My first essat in 5 years, and in a foreign language to boot! (English that is)

This september I started attending a back to education course. If I pass this course I will be accepted to one of the top universities is my country.

The first semester I studies Irish Politics and I had to write an essay. I chose mine on the most important changes made to the Irish constitution. I feel I did better then I ever expected I would, but I am still pretty worried about it.

Could some of you friendly redditors please give it a read through and give me some tips or pointers.

It's the first essay I have written in over 5 years and the first one I have ever written in English.

Here is a link to a download of it.