The Invisible Door

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Heavy eyelids, I’m suddenly awoken by the squealing of the tiny room that won’t sit still.

The chair squeaks as I move to adjust my aching back.

The smell is stale of lost souls and dried tears.

Nearby steel meets linoleum, the sound echoing through the corridor.

Closing my eyes again I can hear their soft whispers coming from around the corner.

Peeking around the corner I see her, nervously clicking her pen, avoiding my gaze.

She walked towards room 8, disappearing through the door as though it wasn’t even there.

I looked both ways down the hall, seeing not a soul I walked towards the ominous door.

From the front it was a regular door; solid wood, steel handle, rubber stopper on the bottom.

Lifting my hand I drew two fingers down the length of the door in front of my face.

The wood melted away, leaving only transparent lines where my fingers once slid.

With my palm I erased more, revealing her deceptive disappearance.

Beyond stood a white stairway; only coldness was emitting from this invisible door.