[1966] Dead Fish

I'm not sure about posting this, but I need a bit of a distraction, so why not.

This is a flashback scene that belongs to (but isn't part of) a longer story. Some context is missing, but the scene itself should be clear enough. I'm interested in any and all feedback, but I'm most curious about how these characters come across and any thoughts about their relationship. The whole point of this thing was for me to explore the dynamic between them.

To give some context: They're cousins, and it's supposed to be "present-day, real world", so to speak. It's not fantasy or sci-fi or post-apocalyptic or anything like that.

Also, warning for anyone who cares: They swear a lot (maybe too much? Tell me if it's too much lol).

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