[1980] The Protos Interview

Hey peeps. Very interested in any feedback you might be able to give me on this piece. It's the beginning of a first-person POV story taking place in a near-future world where a terrible disaster has rendered much of the eastern United States an uninhabitable radioactive wasteland.

A young reporter travels to interview the cause of the disaster as he sits in prison...

Story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1k_O_w5m9hccGJR6gay0vEOfI_o9HXcDMa99LcKQdfIc/edit?usp=sharing

Crit: using up the last of my bank from this critique https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/ol2kgu/3140_stolen/h5p0pby/