0:18: You get forced out by Cassie poke. You didn't have to give up this area entirely though.
0:22: You're following the Zhin, but shooting the Cassie from where you were before would have been better. You're taking their side of the map and you have a corner to work with.
0:42: Minor detail: You can use your shout to cross this area while damage immune instead of turning around and dashing.
0:46: Again, you're shooting from this area (heaven) which peeks half the map and doesn't really control anything. There's a pattern of you getting forced out of their side, getting healed up, and then not retaking the space.
0:55: You drop and dash into the middle of the open. You could have stayed in keep where you were playing. Then, you back up to point and stack with your Barik, which means that you're not really controlling anything. (Notice how the Vora mounts through for free on the right at 1:00 because you dropped. The Cassie killed your Zhin because you weren't playing with him.) When you won the fight, try to take a side instead of standing in the middle of the open. Playing either left with your Zhin or chipping at them from the right would have been better.
1:35: You definitely could have touched here. It's a 4v4 and your team gets a kill a few seconds after they cap. There was a very real chance that you could have won that fight.
2:30: If you had dashed 2 seconds earlier, you would have killed this Io. She was alone without movement but you held off on following up for so long that she had time to rotate.
3:09: You notice a half health Vora chasing your Zhin, choose not to go help, dash away, and then you come back 5 seconds later. You could have just shot her.
3:23: You didn't have to drop here. You do the same damage as you do from high ground, except you're much safer up there. You can also contest from high so you could shield on the railing and stop cart if you choose to.
3:40: You're contesting cart in the middle of the open. Ideal scenario would have been to contest from high ground, but you could have played in the corner on the left side where the Ash is standing. However, they did commit 3 ults for this, so it's not the biggest deal that you lost the defense.
3:59: You dismounted early. You could have pushed to their side. If they had all played on the left side, you would be stuck.
4:05: You have 2 players with you that can shoot the Io. This is super risky and the Io probably could have gotten away if she didn't panic and used leap.
4:27: You could just shield the Vora's damage. You ran in a very scary direction because if the Cassie turned around, you would be dead.
4:38: Your Grover is dead so you might want to heal out of combat instead of shooting. Also please stop playing here.
5:27: You could have been aggressive on their side. Also please stop playing here.
6:01: Shooting their backline is more important than shooting the tanks doing nothing on point.
6:45: You could have shot them from the left side instead of moving all the way over here. You are not doing meaningful damage. Also please stop playing here.
7:31: You're playing in the middle of the open again. Contest the Cassie on the left or poke them from the right.
7:48: Should not have died to Cassie here. You have both shield and shout.
7:56: Don't need to stack with your Barik. Play on the left side maybe. You can prevent them from pushing left while still being able to shoot point.
8:53: You were playing with your Zhin, which is great. But your Zhin has now left you and is playing on the left side (less great). Follow him. Usually on Stone Keep pushes, having a tank control the high ground on the left side is important. You can shoot down onto people on low ground while preventing their damage from shooting down on you.
9:10: You don't really need to be on cart here. Go take the left side high ground.
9:22: You died because you were alone. If Zhin and Grover were with you, their team would have died when they pushed you. However, Zhin was pushing the left side high ground. If you had noticed that you were alone a bit earlier, you could have followed him there.
10:07: You're kinda doing nothing here. Maybe rotate and take left.
11:27: Keep in mind that if Barik dies, you're probably the one that has to contest.
12:02: Good job recognizing that Inara is alone. Instead of shouting for no reason though, grabbing her when DR was down would have stopped her escape and given your Zhin time to kill her.
Items: Every single member of their team has CC. You might want to consider picking up Resilience.
Major things:
Try to play with your Zhin more. Whenever you did play with your Zhin, you guys both popped off.
Try not to drop from high ground for no reason.
Try not to get caught in the middle of the open or stack point with Barik. Going back to the first point, playing with your Zhin is probably a good bet. He was usually pushing a side.
Wow! Thanks a lot, its pretty gratifying to have you confirm my previous thoughts and point out things I didn't consider. I'll admit the failed point touches were very embarrassing....
0:18: You get forced out by Cassie poke. You didn't have to give up this area entirely though.
0:22: You're following the Zhin, but shooting the Cassie from where you were before would have been better. You're taking their side of the map and you have a corner to work with.
0:42: Minor detail: You can use your shout to cross this area while damage immune instead of turning around and dashing.
0:46: Again, you're shooting from this area (heaven) which peeks half the map and doesn't really control anything. There's a pattern of you getting forced out of their side, getting healed up, and then not retaking the space.
0:55: You drop and dash into the middle of the open. You could have stayed in keep where you were playing. Then, you back up to point and stack with your Barik, which means that you're not really controlling anything. (Notice how the Vora mounts through for free on the right at 1:00 because you dropped. The Cassie killed your Zhin because you weren't playing with him.) When you won the fight, try to take a side instead of standing in the middle of the open. Playing either left with your Zhin or chipping at them from the right would have been better.
1:35: You definitely could have touched here. It's a 4v4 and your team gets a kill a few seconds after they cap. There was a very real chance that you could have won that fight.
2:30: If you had dashed 2 seconds earlier, you would have killed this Io. She was alone without movement but you held off on following up for so long that she had time to rotate.
3:09: You notice a half health Vora chasing your Zhin, choose not to go help, dash away, and then you come back 5 seconds later. You could have just shot her.
3:23: You didn't have to drop here. You do the same damage as you do from high ground, except you're much safer up there. You can also contest from high so you could shield on the railing and stop cart if you choose to.
3:40: You're contesting cart in the middle of the open. Ideal scenario would have been to contest from high ground, but you could have played in the corner on the left side where the Ash is standing. However, they did commit 3 ults for this, so it's not the biggest deal that you lost the defense.
3:59: You dismounted early. You could have pushed to their side. If they had all played on the left side, you would be stuck.
4:05: You have 2 players with you that can shoot the Io. This is super risky and the Io probably could have gotten away if she didn't panic and used leap.
4:27: You could just shield the Vora's damage. You ran in a very scary direction because if the Cassie turned around, you would be dead.
4:38: Your Grover is dead so you might want to heal out of combat instead of shooting. Also please stop playing here.
5:27: You could have been aggressive on their side. Also please stop playing here.
6:01: Shooting their backline is more important than shooting the tanks doing nothing on point.
6:45: You could have shot them from the left side instead of moving all the way over here. You are not doing meaningful damage. Also please stop playing here.
7:31: You're playing in the middle of the open again. Contest the Cassie on the left or poke them from the right.
7:48: Should not have died to Cassie here. You have both shield and shout.
7:56: Don't need to stack with your Barik. Play on the left side maybe. You can prevent them from pushing left while still being able to shoot point.
8:53: You were playing with your Zhin, which is great. But your Zhin has now left you and is playing on the left side (less great). Follow him. Usually on Stone Keep pushes, having a tank control the high ground on the left side is important. You can shoot down onto people on low ground while preventing their damage from shooting down on you.
9:10: You don't really need to be on cart here. Go take the left side high ground.
9:22: You died because you were alone. If Zhin and Grover were with you, their team would have died when they pushed you. However, Zhin was pushing the left side high ground. If you had noticed that you were alone a bit earlier, you could have followed him there.
10:07: You're kinda doing nothing here. Maybe rotate and take left.
11:27: Keep in mind that if Barik dies, you're probably the one that has to contest.
12:02: Good job recognizing that Inara is alone. Instead of shouting for no reason though, grabbing her when DR was down would have stopped her escape and given your Zhin time to kill her.
Items: Every single member of their team has CC. You might want to consider picking up Resilience.
Major things:
Try to play with your Zhin more. Whenever you did play with your Zhin, you guys both popped off.
Try not to drop from high ground for no reason.
Try not to get caught in the middle of the open or stack point with Barik. Going back to the first point, playing with your Zhin is probably a good bet. He was usually pushing a side.
Remember to get touch when Barik is dead.
Minor thing:
Wow! Thanks a lot, its pretty gratifying to have you confirm my previous thoughts and point out things I didn't consider. I'll admit the failed point touches were very embarrassing....