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Gorgeous, you can feel your passion… the exploration of feelings.

(The monarch butterflies migrate through my state this month. These pieces are made to parallel each other.)

*Monarch - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Butterflies*

&amp;#x200B;

Colorful beauty - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -  Call her “full beauty”

Amber, cherry

Style is pure - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - And her cheery smile is pure

Wholly gilded art  - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Holy gilded heart

That brilliance here

It’s indescribable - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -  That brilliant spirit’s indescribable

The butterflies together  - - - - - - - - - -  We put our lives together,

Meander - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -   Me and her

[1](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/prgjkq/you_waited/hdjbft3?utm_source=share&amp;utm_medium=web2x&amp;context=3)   [2](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/prj409/fleeting_prints/hdjcvqa?utm_source=share&amp;utm_medium=web2x&amp;context=3)

Butterflies and Love Letters