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I really like the message here. What I interpreted it is the idea of walking through your pain. In order to find the light, you must feel the rain. If you don’t, it will eat you alive. I felt that message in this and I really liked it!

This is lovely OP. Though the theme of clouds signifying sorrow is a bit overused, you've presented it in a unique manner and I like the imagery presented of hiding under a roof to get away from whatever these "sorrows" may be. Avoidance never does anyone any good. I'd suggest playing with your formatting, potentially adding some line breaks. I do like your punctuation which is obviously thought out. Thanks for sharing OP.

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