[2460] Canis Lupus
This is a standalone short story where the main character wakes up one day to find that he is turning into a wolf. This is my first submission so any critique is appreciated, though I'm also curious about the following:
- Does the progression of the story make sense/seem natural? Are there places that drag on too long or aren't developed enough?
- Is the protagonist characterized effectively?
- Does the writer's voice come through?
- Is the story enjoyable?
Link: -snip-
Thanks!
Posted Oct 23, 2021, 6:36 AM UTC · edited
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