[700] Synopsis for "Replaneted", a science fiction romance

Hi all, I need fresh eyes to take a look at this synopsis, which I plan to send out to agents. It's not a query letter or pitch. It's meant to be about a page long and accompanies a query letter as a summary of the events in the story.

I'm mostly looking for line edits and any plot holes or "gotchas" that might appear when the story is condensed to summary form. Anything that doesn't look professional.

Edit: Google doc should be working now. Sorry about that.

Google Doc

Critique I did (for credit)