[631] Bitter September - Epilogue

Urban fantasy

This is the wrap-up to the second Halloween House short story. I'm planning on writing one more of these next year to finish the tale of Larry and Nick.

In this epilogue, Nick decides to finally find out if the blonde zombie sharing Larry's bed has part of his dead friend Carla's soul inside.

Any feedback would be more than welcome.

Story:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AU3nGzRX1SJ31CZgXnPhegtTcijO9l_ZRGNcsVa8bV0/edit?usp=sharing

Crit: rest of my bank from [this] (https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/qipriw/2019_unlit_paths/hj3neje/) critique.

Posted Nov 8, 2021, 7:26 PM UTC

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