[1772] Chapter 1 - Grays
First Chapter of a new story. Curious about general readability, interest, and any other feedback. Thanks!
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First Chapter of a new story. Curious about general readability, interest, and any other feedback. Thanks!
Previous critique: 3148 Beast
Posted Nov 11, 2021, 6:20 PM UTC · edited