[2600] The D.J.I.N.N. Conspiracy

This is my first submission so I hope I have everything right.

My story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pDlcYm5pOp8Cr8mcKwUWguSvDia9CBefzG4DdnSQevI/edit?usp=sharing

My critique: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/qr70bf/3148_beast/hkfdnqe/

Questions: This is sort of an odd concept and I'm not sure how understandable it is. I'm trying to walk the line between too much exposition and confusing the reader. My plan is for every chapter to have some sort of relevant text excerpt about the world, and explain things as they become important.

I'm also worried I set up a bunch of rules for how things work, then the inciting incident almost immediately breaks them.