[917] Seven Years

I'm looking for general feedback, impressions etc. My story is a riffing on The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time in a sort of "pseudo-historical" figure who inspired the legend sense. I hope to submit it to a site that publishes video game-related fiction under a thousand words. I appreciate anything you can give me, thank you.

EDIT: Thank you for the feedback, everybody.

critique proof: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/qrfpuw/1081_90_words_a_day_chapter_2/hkigtvm/?context=3