Full link to my website root if you wish to start from the beginning: https://nightmares.technically.fun

Link to my "About" page which gives some context: https://nightmares.technically.fun/about

Note: The About Page is not necessary but you may find it helpful in understanding what's going on here, but also you may find it fun to read without the context. Let me know if you went in blind or not in your comments!

And finally, direct link to this post's story for discussion/critiquing:

Nightmares 1. I Remember the Light, https://nightmares.technically.fun/catalogue/i-remember-the-light/

What I am interested most in chatting about:

The big thing I'm curious to hear is what do you folks interpret from the story. What do you think it means? I've ran these stories past people I know and hearing their interpretations of the story has at times startled me. I really try and just ink shed each of these stories/poems as I go, usually in bursts of creativity and I feel the need to just like... get it all out as quick as possible. Then I clean up a bit the next day and move on.

I am open to any and all criticisms and welcome them.

• What does the story say to you? Were the specific parts that really stuck out as meaning something? Did anything resonate with you?

• What was your favorite part, and why? What part was the worst, and why?

• I really try to focus on evoking/capturing that sort of ephemeral way dreams present themselves. How successful would you say I was in this goal? Did the story "feel" like my dream? How well would you say I succeeded in making you feel like you were there with me in that dream, experiencing it with me?

And most importantly...

Thanks for your time, I really appreciate that you took the time to read my work!

My matching critiques: [2309] Chapter 1. LGBT, Fantasy Setting. https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/qtk2e9/2309_chapter_1_lgbt_fantasy_setting/hkkjupj/

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/qtk2e9/2309_chapter_1_lgbt_fantasy_setting/hkn01n4