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maybe I'm not familiar with this format but it seems to make it harder to read. that aside i think this is a good poem and it reminds me of a introvert struggling with some of the consequences of solitude and a lack of guidance, as fear replaces meaning meaning can be found through confrontation and options with space is uncertainty and speech from someone with no direction always comes out jumbled. that's what I got form it, maybe I'm wrong.