[2806] Chapter 1 - Chaos Strikes Twice

work: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TiXZFD4QRcqnN858ufT6Ly010bY42DZhwTyCFlBG2mA/edit

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Crit [2900]: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/rk18hw/2949_the_lighthouse_keeper/

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Crit: [700]

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/rk4opa/712_getting_a_rug_delivered/

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There are magical powers in this story, but they are grounded. The 2 main things I hope to discover are:

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1. what separates my work from a good piece of writing?
2. More specifically, what separates my work from a well-written light novel?