Incomplete Fantasy
These are three separate poems. It's my first ones. All feedback appreciated.
Girl is crying
Wheels are turning
Mind is shaking
Visions drifting
Girl is crying
Stepping off the beaten path
Castles rise from stories lost
Gazing at the life to be
Wishing for its dream to live
Buzzer sounds
Coffees ground
Morning traffic
Work awaits
Lunch break hits
Eyes drift up
In cloudy sky
Angels erupt
Pages turn
Back cover met
World returns
A hollow set
Clock back in
Boss calls due
Locking in
A future fool
Sign back out
Audio on
Brain builds anew
World covered in dew
Ruling it all
Life’s grasped in hand
Smiling faces
Waving hands
Yellow light
Abrupt halt
Missed a turn
Minutes lost
Home once more
New vessel cracked
Heros fight
Eyes fade black
Wheels are turning
Mind is shaking
Visions drifting
Girl is crying
Girl is dead
Wheels are turning
Mind is shaking
Visions drifting
Girl is crying
Stepping off the beaten path
Castles rise from stories lost
Gazing at the life to be
Wishing for its dream to live
Buzzer sounds
Coffees ground
Morning traffic
Work awaits
Lunch break chimes
Desk erodes
Woods surround
Singing crowds around
Pages turn
Back cover met
World returns
Now shaded gray
Clock back in
Boss calls due
Locking in
A future tool
Sign back out
Engine sputters
Brain reviews
The day of a mule
Putting in work
Mind’s task corrected
Face relaxes
Guided over pavement black
Red light
Stop made quick
Right turn caught
Efficient in thought
Home again
Emails replied
News repeats
Eyes fade black
Reality grasped
Mind firmly planted
Decision made
Girl is dead
Girl is laughing
Wheels are turning
Mind is shaking
Visions drifting
Girl is crying
Stepping off the beaten path
Castles rise from stories lost
Gazing at the life to be
Wishing for its dream to live
Buzzer sounds
Coffees ground
Morning traffic
Work awaits
Lunch break hits
Eyes drift up
In cloudy sky
Angels erupt
Pages turn
Back cover met
World returns
Colorful charm absent
Clock back in
Boss calls due
Quitting now
A future patient soon
Run on out
Audio on
Brain builds anew
World made for you
Ruling it all
Life’s grasped in hand
Smiling faces
Waving hands
Green light
Charge on through
Going straight
Time frozen still
Home transformed
A castle true
Blue knights battle
Gowns flowing in the wind
Running away
Painting life anew
Looking at the white walled cell
Harness tight and smile bright
Wheels are rolling
Mind is free
Visions flying
Girl is laughing
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Posted Dec 24, 2021, 3:36 AM UTC