I love this!!! The formatting is wonderful and unique, I really enjoy it. I love these lines, they hit hard "She is the wind, my walls she easily collapsed" "She is the raindrops beating on my glass She is the lightning I wish will not pass" and "From ship I see, single blades of grass topped With heavy drops of shining, morning dew I realize, that is all her too." Keep writing!


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I really love this, you paint a very deep view of your image of her. Beautiful.

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