Work in progress. She looks a bit stiff. Anything I can adjust?

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Work in progress. She looks a bit stiff. Anything I can adjust?

Posted Feb 13, 2022, 2:36 AM UTC

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ArtCritBotMODAI Overlord•

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I did this painting by using ideas from several pictures and combining them to make this one. As a result, I've been winging the proportions and angles. I still have to work in some details but I'm wondering if the basic shapes look proportionate or if anything looks off.

If you have any other ideas on how to improve, I'd love to hear those too!


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The fabric of the dress is off to a really good start! As far as proportions go, the hands look a little bit too small - as a good rule of thumb, the distance from wrist to fingertips should be about the same as the height of the face. The angle of the legs/hips is kind of ambiguous, but that might be more values than form.

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typeyhandsOP•

Hmmm I think I see what you mean about the legs. The fabric kind of makes them both look like right legs? Is that what's going on? Maybe her left heel should be lifted and I'll shade the leg more?

The legs bother me lol

I'll fix the hands too. Thank you!

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Reem_Kala•

I think the stiffness is coming from the pose : both of her feet are anchored in the ground, her shoulders are aligned, and her back is straight. For future pieces you could look up references that really align with the vibe you want (if you want something more dynamic for example) and work with those

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typeyhandsOP•

Hmmm you're right. I'll drop a shoulder and lift her back foot, I think.

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