Spices from stardust which salted this fertile earth is a beautiful line

I love the descriptive language; it’s whimsical and colourful.
I really like it!


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it is a great life we live- 

the weathering of a man 

the patina of woman 

it is a great life we love-

&amp;#x200B;

this is the shimmering,

the seasoning of days,

spices from stardust which

salted this fertile earth-

&amp;#x200B;

who knew a planet was

filled with savor?

who knew love would

spin from nothing to everything?

universes in a glance

of Sky blue eyes-

&amp;#x200B;

the Whirlwind has found

a place to alight in my head-

twirling is something now

invoked with a kiss.

&amp;#x200B;

it is a great life we live

you and i,

spinning, tumbling, billowing then

crashing against the stone

into cool, salty spray

thinning, becoming, blue, gone.

&amp;#x200B;

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