[2019] Black Lungs, Broken Mind

Hi all,

Hope you're doing well. I would appreciate feedback in all areas, but especially any areas that lacked clarity.

I also want to give a quick heads up that addiction and suicide are discussed in this chapter.

My critiques:
[2595]: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/t99m45/2595_wolves/i1diw1d/?context=3
[1565]: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/t9atv3/1565_a_golden_sun/i00i1v3/?context=3

My story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1epkabglTfBQZ82eLCXWSByeF807GmC54YGgyS2JGTm4/edit