[2856] Lialoct (parts 7-10 out of 10)

Short Fiction

Hi all,

It continues, and ends.

PREVIOUSLY on Lialoct:

After crashing with his bicycle and injuring his elbow, Stefan, a likeable person lol, wins a prescription for Lialoct on the lottery. His pregnant girlfriend, Sophie, wants him to throw the pills away but he doesn't. He can't sleep, thinking of all the problems that will come from the political system change that is underway, and ends up taking two pills. Before he knows it, he's embracing the new era. The next day, he takes the metro to the university for work, learns classes are cancelled due to a student rally against tuiton fees, and proceeds to hijack said rally with his own message, all the while popping pills. On the way home he realizes he's being followed, and there's a strange man with a beige coat waiting in his building. At home, Sophie, who's been sacked and threatens to leave Stephan due to him still taking the Lialoct, receives a mysterious phone call. There's danger ahead.

STORY

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gPyPCn87TfZDZ__emsnze9gomqxGdUkfRh_iNfCm2gY/edit

!I'm considering adding a chase scene at the end of part 7 for a little more excitement, what do you think?!<

CRITIQUES

https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/tuol8l/3621_all_the_lost_souls/i386imq/

https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/tu3p74/917_under_the_surface/i37uyfa/

Thank you so much in advance to anyone who reads or leaves a comment.

Posted Apr 3, 2022, 3:47 PM UTC

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