[957] The Daughter of Time

Hey everyone. This is something I've been kicking around for a bit. The blurb would be something like:

Greg Talbot has been granted an awesome power, one that makes him the equal of the gods—or maybe even more. Exploring the secrets of creation, however, is put on hold after Greg causes the death of his best friend Stephen. Now his quest is to reverse time and save him, or destroy the universe trying.

Let me know what you think. Thanks in advance.

Critique: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/tx0co5/1029_dinner_date/i3kqngv/

Story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1sdDi4wozWkAAH0UtASY4pimXLnxZVuSmH3q53XZU6xU/edit?usp=sharing