[411] The One

So this is a thing...it's definitely more experimental and is inspired by writers such as Maggie Nelson, DFW, etc. Any and all thoughts/reactions/suggestions more than welcome.

[411] The One

Accidentally leeched the first time, so I'm really hoping this crit is high-quality (I'm new here, as you can tell). [762] A God of Ants

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Interested in reading what people think about using second person and whether the one instance of dialogue actually adds anything or if it should be deleted.

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Edited post for grammar