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This was really sweet and well written.

It was an absolute joy to read.

Great job!

I love how this feels like a tiny moment in time I'm bearing witness to. Quiet, poignant and relatable. The simplicity of the language and lack of flowery language works, it makes it feel more honest.

Feels like it has a stoic vibe to it.. loved it!!

i think i am going to start praying. not to any particular god, but to the nearest beautiful thing. i do not think the universe owes me anything, so i will not expect an answer. i know better than to hope for a miracle. i don't know. i guess what i'm hoping is somehow, impossibly, the tiniest wrinkle of the world hears me. this is our communion, the universe and i: quiet and messy and the truest thing i have ever known.

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