Thank you :)  It is a true story. I showed this to my friend. She laughed!

if this is a true story, then you need some better friends. this is such a scary story, even scarier than those horror stories and true crime dramas. to be reduced to entertainment, not aware of who’s watching you or what you’re doing. your writing is also great. good pace, puts me in the perspective of both the narrator and his friends. great job.


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There was nothing deep in this poem. Straightforward!

Perhaps it's a bit too literal for me to understand the meaning? Unless there is none?

 A bitter rose wine

 Left my friends

 With grounds

To test if  

I can get drunk

I drank the  whole bottle

I walked around  the room

Trying to prove

That I was steady

I kept murmuring

Things I don't  remember

They waited until

 I got my senses back

 To send me home  

You can read my poems here: [https://nithinzpoetry.blogspot.com/2022/04/my-final-day.html](https://nithinzpoetry.blogspot.com/2022/04/my-final-day.html)

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Rose Wine