Love.

Love is a three letter word I don’t understand

Sand pours into its part and my love turns to heat But I grow angry

What sense has this? What meaning? To suffer purely for its own sake?

Hatred raged through his veins A type of anger only heard not understood The needle slipped , the camel lay there Burning , burning, burning

The hate that tears you and splits you apart Oh , have I truly become this way?

Mockery and mocking ; laughter and laughing They don’t know and they will never understand

The love I had ,

The seer said supposedly I was looking for a way out The hurricane was too much to bear

The pale moonlight fucks itself. Nowhere to hide

Pathetic . Pitiless love dies slowly . But the pain drags on with a long sharp knife. Goodbye forever love and loving

Good bye , good - bye life. You have killed me this time.

They left me to die, to rot To die to die

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