Blank Stare

Poem

Vacuous eyes are what I provide

To those who seek to see inside

I fear entangled relations

where balancing words and gestures are indicative of decorum

Why must I venture out into unknown territory?

Tasked with mapping the location and identifying its native species

I rather stay where I feel safe,

The sanctuary that is my mind

Where I control all outcomes

never experiencing deceit or defeat

I Expand my conscious internally

Making sure that no one truly knows

what’s within these fleshy walls and steel beamed bones

each nerve behaving as wrapped wires helping keep my motion evasive

Sometimes I wonder if stretching out a hand would welcome fulfillment

But before I could act my ambition is detained

Placing my words beneath my breath

Becoming incoherent at best

Left to remain behind the doors of introduction

Concluding that my loneliness is ever long

one of my older poems that has had little work done on it in the form of editing. Any feed back would be greatly appreciated thanks in advance for taking the time to read it.

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Posted May 20, 2022, 11:23 PM UTC

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