Yooo!!!
This is beautiful bro🔥🔥

I love how succinctly you've put this.
Thank you.

The atoms in our bodies were all once stardust.
It is somehow beautiful to return to them and burn within their hearts.

'Terrifyingly beautiful'
That's the one😂
Gorgeous but oh so intimidating.

I will keep writing! Thank you!🤗🤗❤

Right. As they should be. Space is terrifyingly beautiful. I'm so glad! Keep writing! I absolutely loved it! It was my pleasure!

My feelings towards space are complicated, it's refreshing to see that my lil poem has spoken to someone who definitively loves space. I do too but I also fear it ngl.

I'm glad my words were able to bring to your mind images of what you love.
I hope you have a fantastic day.
Your words are more encouraging than you know. 

Thank you so much for your input🤗

I love space myself. If I could live among the stars, just floating along but with a definite way home I would. This poem really helps me image what you're writing.


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In the moments between life, we become god.
That's super clever!🤝🔥

Thank you very much for your feedback.
It means a ton to me❤

Disintegrated to photons, and you will swim through the universe, in harmonious beautiful journey, to clash with another photon in creating life.
We could make religion out of this sacrifices.

thanks for the wonderful compliment ☺️☺️✨

Thank you friend😊

I don't know if you're tall or short, but you sure are sweet❤
Have a great day🤗

Oh damn. Thank you Ryfeaway.
Your encouragement means a lot🤭
Have a great day!



I think this mostly encapsulates my work 😂

I tend to try to express as much as I can in as few words as possible. It's that proclivity towards efficiency in writing we are taught in science class maybe😂

Thank you greatly for your feedback.
Have a fun day.

It is a beautiful little poem ending in a nice rhyme.

I interpret it as a reassuring voice motivating you to follow your most ardent of desires in the most fierce of ways. The hottest star seems like a metaphor for ambition and drive.

    If I could reach for the stars

    I'd grab the hottest one I can

    And feel it burn through my flesh

    As stardust meets stardust 

    And I find my place

    In the vacuum of space


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Onion.

Reach for the Stars