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There I am, complete.
Sitting there, semen running down my seat.
A brief moment of relief but now my sadness feels concrete.
Some desperate attempts at feedback:
Posted May 26, 2022, 1:48 PM UTC
This seems like an ode to post-nut clarity. Love it
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A feeling we are all too familiar with!
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i like this poem. this poem is sort of nostalgic for me in a strange way. it reminds me of when i was a child and thought that that pleasure was sinful and that i was doing something wrong when i did it. the shame afterwards is awful, and im glad i don’t have that anymore. this poem is simple, but powerful and sheds light upon a common feelings. well done.
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If any poem makes you feel anything, it's not in a strange way don't worry!
Good to hear you have been developing through your time here on this planet.
Keep up the good work with both life and poetry.
Yes I do tend to prefer short poems, even more so when they are good.