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After Robert Frost

Poem

If life were simple & I were free

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I’d walk a mile just to see

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Some leaves upon a forest floor

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And then I know I’d walk some more

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Just tripping softly through a field

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A flower-picking hand to wield

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A bit of wood, both rare and fine

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It would not do, mere oak or pine

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Upon a trail for many a yard

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To gather baubles soft or hard

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Far too alike a bower-bird

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With trinkets flirting, so I’ve heard

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As I am human after all

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And haven’t sparkle nor the gall

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To strike outside my species’ mold

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Or gender’s: mine to have and hold

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To heart, to breast, to feather

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Too shy to venture whether

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A laden heart and gathering hand

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Were not unlike a lover’s band

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If ‘morrow could become today

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And walking weren’t walking away

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I’d time and place and grandeur

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And all that’s expected, slander

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To wit, a-traipsing through a glen

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A bit of bark to schlep and then

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No altar, pillar, public place

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But tree-ringed clearing, it’s my place

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To hallow, heal and to adore

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A speckled consort evermore

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I am happy with the theme and format but feel the wording needs...something.

Posted May 27, 2022, 5:29 PM UTC · edited

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